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Just Friends

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The thorns of a thousand roses cannot compare what you've done to me,

A cage you've weaved all around, preventing me from flying free.

I wish I'd never said 'Yes', never agreed to this,

We were fine before,

Just friends, nothing more.

You weren't trying to hold my hand,

Trying to kiss my lips,

Trying to make me into someone I'm not.

Just smiling and laughing along,

Not taking my heart and leaving it to rot.

I don't wish you were dead,

Or in pain and suffering,

I just wish I'd forget when we were together,

The good and the bad, not remembering.

Just wish I could turn back time,

My heart in its place,

No thorns as my cage,

No pain, no suffering.

Just friends.
Just something I found that I wrote a couple years back... Yeah... back when someone dumped me... ON MSN!!! :iconangryplz: I hate when people just cop out and go the easy way out and dump people on MSN! AHH!!! And it was even worse because he was the one who asked me out... I was the reluctant one... like in the poem... GARK! Well... hope you guys like this... ^u^
Well... it's also for #Weekly-Challenges' challenge of love/heartbreak... I don't actually know if we're allowed to submit writing so... perhaps I should ask first...
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Nadroj-kun's avatar
Very powerful

Honestly it scared me how I could identify with this piece, given I've been thinking these kinds of things all week.

Good job